Milked Like a Bitch
The Stallion chooses fruit over beer,
I choose beer over fruit.
Nutrients to feed his hard strong body,
Liquid shit to feed the hanging flesh on bones.
Lying in sand,
Wet from the sea,
As I sit and write,
Like a bitch that’s just been milked.
Below my skeleton is beautiful,
It’s just the surrounding mush that spoils it.
enjoyed it 🙂
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Trippy stuff PINKY! The synapses were gelling when you wrote that one.
Trippy,really?! Thank you as always for reading ED 🙂
Just saw this filed under poetry on the wordpress.com main page: That’s HUGE PINKY! Keep up the great work!
According to the Urban dictionary, trippy is an adjective meaning cool, freaky, groovy, amazing, or all of the above, depending on the context in which it’s used. Although “trippy” is a fairly new word, the root word, “trip,” refers to soft psychedelic trips and has been in use since the 60’s.
I hope the context conveys that I meant the former. 🙂
Thank you ED!!! We must hookup someday,wherever that is…..
Now that’s poetry… Great job man! In exchange we offer you our latest post where we got a little creative with history! Keep up the good work!
Hope you liked it, and it’s not self publication really? x Pinky
Hahaha no no… Well of course we did that too. But I really enjoyed it! Cheers,
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Thanks Mrs Dimondz 🙂
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I don’t know how to react to this poem, really.
Go with instinct…
I don’t know what the moral of this story is supposed to be, nor do I understand what meaning or idea you’re trying to convey with this blog. I’m sorry that I don’t have a more engaging or insightful comment to write for your post. I guess the part about the “wet sea” struck me as cool because I’m a beach girl and I truly love the ocean.
Do you mean the one post,or my blog? Are you looking at the blog or the one you have been directed to? Are you American? This blog,as you call it is a really important part of me.I have written sketch books since i was 18 and this is a continuation of that. There is no moral, or explanation. The words and images are art….are felt, and are really important.Its expression. Thank you for looking, and commenting. There is no moral to the story. I wonder why you expect one? What is your expectation of meaning? ~Pinkyx
I meant your one post, sorry, not your entire blog. And yes, I actually do expect a moral, a meaning or an idea from anything that I read, including people’s blogs & posts. I apologize that I didn’t “feel” your art and your words from your one post. I’m not really one for poetry, which is probably why I didn’t grasp the non-meaning of what you posted. Thanks for your reply. 🙂
The meaning is ambiguous and very personal, but can easily be interpreted by the reader, depending on where he/she is coming from, i think!. There is no need to apologize. Happy blogging 🙂
PS Life, it is what it is really?
~ Milky beautiful that’s why your blog’s been freshly pressed! I love the mix of words, very creative! Cheers! – Bliss, The Lurker’s List
Thank you Bliss. The loveliest comment yet. Kisses. Pinky x
Raw and beautiful. Congrats on being freshly pressed….very deserving. 🙂
Thank you sooo much x
Thank you Aimee Lee.
very surreal. The analogy twixt horse and that particular person was interesting. In my reading of it, ‘my own’ personal interp, I see the person as male and a physically ‘wasted’ alcoholic, unlike the ‘stallion’ where the very word itself conjures up strength and vigour.
I like your interpretation. From my perspective it’s more about a lack of confidence that alcoholism. However your words do not stray far from the truth. Thank you for reading, and for your comment. Pinky.
i think i kind of understand this / the thinking behind it (to some extent atleast,, in my own way) and what a huge impact self image / confidence can have on ones life / thoughts . . . . however regardless of physical realities even if impossible self improvement goals were achieved it still (unlikely) will make to difference to any potential feelings of inferiority , its all stems from ones mind set , the only alterations that may prove bennifical are (most likely) those to be made regarding ones perspective /way of thinking rather then physical changes, t’is understandably hard tho . .
. . anyway rambbling aside (in my opinion) this is a very beautifully deep, self expressive piece, thank you for sharen -which in its self is brave in a deeper self exposing kinda way 🙂
keep up the snazzy works and take cares ~:)